I wonder, when and why
You buried me in thy soil of lie,
Let me spring with joy
Plowed my spirits with trifles of coy
Seeded me with ounces of dearth
Cascaded into me sprinkles of mirth
Wonder the plot of your vicious mind
To soak your manure so opined
I grew like a girl so scrawny
In your ever gleaming torch of irony
My other pleas to you my life
Play the tunes of my favorite fife
Let my spirits of crop grow
Let my essence of tuber show
Cut open my strife and stress
Clean all the spots and mess
Scrape me off my skin so dead
Salt and mold me In your finest tread
Embrace me with your oiled clips
Enjoy me, I am your Potato Chips
CCK
11 comments:
I dont know why you chose to use words like THY in one place and YOUR in another.You should avoid the use old fashioned words Preeti.
I dont like another word OPINED.The parallel drawn is wonderful.
The use of thy was more like a metaphorical mockery...
Like you say to a bully a person
We sometimes use terms like Maharaj ki jai ho to a dominating person
or we say you are the greatest to a Kid who looks at us for appreciation
We use old fashioned words to show more impact.
Here I am making a mockery, thats why I used old fashioned words and the rest I chose it to be casual.
Opined was the word I chose, it is a metaphor which meant, no matter what he tried or did
Our fate has its own opinions and ideas.
It is with due respect to all who dont believe in fate, because I do.
Thank you for your views Amiya :)
kinda odd. u really seem rusty....
having said tht nice topic..
and back to GRE word list...
BTW good to see u back
I am feeling rusty too, thanks Gunjan :)
good stuff.. glad to see the rhyme at every turn of the sentence. most ppl seem to have given up on it.
lol, and its alright to use 'thy' etc. anglo saxon needs to live!
Thanks a lot for your views, I am glad you liked it.
Wow...I loved it.. A potato telling its life story lol...really nice...am still smiling :) :)
chanda ide... next yenu gobi manchuri??? :)
Haudhu !!!! how did you guess :)
Crisp! Apparently, in this case, you can only have just one :)
keep it going;;)
thanks Amit :)
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