Darkness cascading into my mind….
Exploring the depths I could find…
Chivalrous of breaking the mold
Indifferent to the tongues hot and cold…
Every moment was a new life led…
Every drop multiplied when I bled…
Every pain felt like a rose on my bed…
Every smile mocked at the alive and dead….
I sulk in the snippets of you and me…
The face of time we scorned with glee...
The refinement I was compelled to see…
Our parting forlorn, when you had to flee
I miss you indeed, "The Mistakes I made”.
The happiness you gave, thou shalt never fade…..
Chivalrous of breaking the mold
Indifferent to the tongues hot and cold…
Every moment was a new life led…
Every drop multiplied when I bled…
Every pain felt like a rose on my bed…
Every smile mocked at the alive and dead….
I sulk in the snippets of you and me…
The face of time we scorned with glee...
The refinement I was compelled to see…
Our parting forlorn, when you had to flee
I miss you indeed, "The Mistakes I made”.
The happiness you gave, thou shalt never fade…..
CCK
Ps- This painting is from pinterest.
7 comments:
An agony hyperbolized ! The rimes are sonorous to strike the abysmal quoins of one's feelings...:)
Reading you very newly and you did never let me down!..:)
Hi Preeti,
After a long time I got to read a well rhythmic and versed poetry. Thumbs up.
Indeed great piece of literature been framed with creat care and dedication...........
Must say "A born Writer and Best possible use of most appropriate words"
It's a pity you don't write often. Else the clouds of your thoughts would have rained into these pages to make them even greener. Found you from Orkut, keep writing. And when you get time, please visit my blog at http://www.rajtilak.net and leave one of your carefully crafted comments there :)
nice prose
each words at a place got the intense feelings...
~NeeR~
neers-rhymes.blogspot.com
a thought provoking poem filled with agony ...good one
Thank you all.. I am glad you all liked it :)
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